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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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All eggs put into one basket Nowadays people are easy to earn money than ever before,some people would take out their save to invest into other industries,as a investor,they would never put all eggs into one basket,because it is very unwise,and exist some risks. Nobody know the investment is success or failure,when we intend to invest,the fist we would draw a plan to use our save carefully,for the investment exist very large risk,the rest of investment would exist some possibility to obtain profit,so that you would't lose all the money,therefore,people put all eggs into one basket is very unadvisedly,even it would cause deadly blow to people's life. Some of us save money,they is prepared for unexpected event,they need to use every coin carefully,so they no matter is investment or start a business,the wise thing is don't put you all money into a deal,that is unwise. In conclusion,when we choose invest or deal,we should balance risk,and then make a decision.

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