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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12936
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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评语:

上下文衔接稍显不流畅;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Today,computer is one of the most thing to us.Our live,study or work can not without computer.It did take mant convinient to us,but every coin has two sides.Internet can help us touch others everytime,everywhere.Gradully,letters replace people's talking. In the past,people would visit each other in festival even common days,a word or a move can touch others heart.Nowadays,in some traditional festival we only send an e-mail to others,no anylonger meeting.like the upon picture,the family communicated by the net though in the same house.So we can see the disadvantage of the internet is destory our based communication.

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