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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章层次较为清晰。
Collecting Money Nowadays, more and more people tend to save money in case there are some emergencies in the future. Some people don't think it is a wise idea, so do I. There has been a wide known story about saving money. The story tells that a chinese woman saved a large amount of money at the cost of her most part of life. She bought a house with the money she saved. But she just have a few years to live in the house before she died. On the contrary, an American woman bought the house first with a loan and lived in the house ever since. She paid the money back with the rest of her life. As we can see from this story, I think it is obvious that the American women was happier, for she has enjoyed her life living in her house. It is also suitable for other situations. So not just put your money in your pocket!
