作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear Peter, How do you do? In your last letter, you siad that you want to learn Chinese well. Then I will give you some advice on it. First of all, you can go to a class for Chinses. There you may get enough help. You can also read magazines or watch TV programs in Chinese. Besides, you can also learn to sing Chinese songs which will make your study more interesting. Of course, making Chinese friends can help you in another way. All in all, learning Chinese is not that difficult if you follow my advice and keep working hard. I wish someday you could speak a fluent Chinese! Yours, Li Hua