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字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇量偏少，也有些单词拼写错误；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；请注意分段。
Collecting Money There has been a wide known story about saving money. The story tells that a chinese woman saved a large amount of money at the cost of many years. She bought a house with the money she saved. But she just have a few years to live in the house before she died. On the contrary, an American woman bought the house first with a loan and lived in the house ever since. She paid the money back with the rest of her life.
