2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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welcome to my hometown.in China,i think the most interesting place is nanjing.you should pay a visit. nanjing is a beatuiful place in jiangsu.actually,nanjing is not just my hometown,in there,you can see FuZiMiao and YUHuatai and so on.also there are many delecious food.they also have a long history.so i suppose you going to. The last,dear friends.meet in nanjing