正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;语言不流畅。
Welcome to my hometown.In China,I think the most interesting place is NanJing.You should pay a visit. NanJing is a beautiful place in JiangSu Province.Actually,nanjing is not just my hometown.There,you can see FuZiMiao and YUHuatai and so on.Also there are many delecious food.They also have a long history.So i suppose you going to. The last,dear friends.Welcome to my hometown.In China,I think the most interesting place is NanJing.You should pay a visit. NanJing is a beautiful place in JiangSu Province.Actually,nanjing is not just my hometown.There,you can see FuZiMiao and YUHuatai and so on.Also there are many delecious food.They also have a long history.So i suppose you going to. The last,dear friends.Welcome to my hometown.In China,I think the most interesting place is NanJing.You should pay a visit. NanJing is a beautiful place in JiangSu Province.Actually,nanjing is not just my hometown.There,you can see FuZiMiao and YUHuatai and so on.Also there are many delecious food.They also have a long history.So i suppose you going to. The last,dear friends.