2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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From the pucture ,we can see that more and more people are cross the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.firstly,with the development of our socienty ,people 's life are better than olders.besides,more and more people are using cell phone every day.what is more, if you use your cell phone every day ,you can't leave it .