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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9028
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;请注意分段。

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Many people are used to draw conclusions on what happened, which they have listened or seen. And almost of us believe in which what we have seen is the truth. But a lot of facts revealed that making a conclusion only with what we listened or saw but not thinking carefully is unwise. Because most of people usually draw their conclusions not only depending on what they have seen and listened but also attaching their thoughts. But we often make a wrong decision because of our unreasonable judgment. So learning to think carefully and treat everything without our self-thought before making a conclusion is so necessary that we can prevent from deciding wrongly. Also we will be used to treating everything with an objective attitude if we form a idea of dealing with everything after thinking carefully since our childhood. It’s irresponsible for every one of us to come up with conclusions rashly on something controversial because sometimes the conclusions which drawn by us concerning not about the result of that thing but also concerning about such as career, schoolwork or relations among the people. In this circumstance, every one of us should pay for the decision we made therefore it’s necessary to define anything objectively but not with an one-sided attitude. Sometimes we have disagreements on the same thing because we draw our conclusions on different viewpoints, which will make the distance among us is further and further if we can not deal well with it. All in all, it’s unreasonable for us to come up with a decision only with our fist sight instead of thinking again and again.

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