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My Idea of a University Arts Festival I think it is necessary to hold the arts festival. I have some personal ideas about the arts festival. I claim it can be divided into several parts. It can include talent show just like singing, dancing, instrumental performance and speech etc. Students’ union could ask mass organizations whether they have talent shows to perform and invite students to take part in talent show to demonstrate their talent. Besides I think students’ union also can prepare some questions and games to interactive with the audience and keep the atmosphere merry and alive. Why do I think so? Because now more and more students have many kinds of talent and they are supposed to have equal chances to show themselves. Arts festival just like a platform, students can show themselves through the platform. Arts festival also can enrich the campus life and make students’ life colorful. In my opinion, if the arts festival is organized well and with attractive content, many students may prepare to attend the arts festival rather than stay in their dormitory. I am looking forward to taking part in the arts festival. I hope students’ union will make it much more like to succeed.
