小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend named Yu. She is a pretty girl with black hairs. She is much taller than me. She is my classmate and her home is nearby. I always play with her after school since we both has similar hobbies, cats. We both has cats at home. She named her cats as Tao. We open go together to take care with cats and make them beauty.