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The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication As internet are widely used by more and more people in amount of fields,our hunmanbeings, at the extent, are impacted by the internet on interpersonal communication.In instance,some friends are accustomed to communicating onlion rather than by communicating face to face.They hold the opinion that it give them many convenient and in the same time they can save many time to attach with each other by internet. However,every sword has two blades.
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