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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4567
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分60.5分
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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;作者能较准确地使用学术词汇,词汇表达稍显贫乏,还要重视拼写问题;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication As internet are widely used by more and more people in amount of fields,our hunmanbeings, at the extent, are impacted by the internet on interpersonal communication.In instance,some friends are accustomed to communicating onlion rather than by communicating face to face.They hold the opinion that it give them many convenient and in the same time they can save many time to attach with each other by internet. However,every sword has two blades.

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