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【题目要求】
It's better for students to live away from home when they at university than to live with parents，agree or disagree ?
【题目讲解】
学校学习的好处，是不是就是老师的功能?上过课的翻翻笔记吧亲爱的们~传道授业解惑，老师的优势专业训练，互动教学过程。然而家长教育，1.家庭环境更轻松，家长可能更耐心，2.家长可以言传身教对不对~但是!有缺陷吗?1.家长可能教育比较随性，没有方法，小孩子接受起来不一定好，效率不高。2.而且家长的知识有限对不?3.家里的设备也有限。不像学校多媒体呀，同学互相帮助呀，图书馆呀等等。
作者用词生动多样，请继续努力，希望能更灵活地使用学术词汇；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。
When a student go to university,is it better to live away from the home or to stay with parents as he used to do?In my opinion,an undergraduate should become independent if he wants to grasp the likelihood of succeed in the future.Whereas it is still controversial in the society. Living along has its sole advantages.First of all,you would be more free than living with parents without their surveillance and so you have more chance to meet various people at leisures.In addition,you could go out or come back at anytime you like.And the most important reason is that you can learn how to get along with others through living under the same roof with unknown flatmates.Of course you can pick up the method to live on your own let along,and it will be the most valuable character in your life. On the contrary,there are a few advantages to stay with parents. the most obvious characteristic is your life will be more safe and covenient,because your mother would do the housework for you without complaint.And it is desirable that you can disregard the considerate cost such as rental,gas fee,television fee and so forth.
