2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

September 24 2014 Today I attend a job fair of Hujiang company.There are many people in the recruitment site.In the crowds I suddenly felt the pressure. The company only recruit a few people, I was wondering whether I could beat so many people?There are a lot of competitors better than me,how can I beat them? This question does not have the most correct answer. I believe that as long as I continue to strive to progress,constantly enrich myself,and constantly learning new skills. Finally I can have enough clout to competent a good job. The most memorable aspect is tonight's interview process.The HR asked about our job intention and ultimately they asked us to send our achievement to their job mailbox.I finally realize that the most important factor is still individual ability.As long as I have good individual ability then I will be able to beat other competitors,and finally entered the company successfully. Although my technique is still not very mature,I will be very hard to learn. I want to continue to accumulate knowledge,constantly enrich my own achievement,and ultimately to become a successful person!