2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer is very quickly development.Now,we can use computer calculation ,writing and amusement.So we are rarely use our brain to think .We are alway deply on computer.It is harmful for people .If we don't use our brian ,we will become stupid. Despite computer is useful to our life,we need to use our brain sometimes.