2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分学术词汇；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以。

As is vividly shown in the picture, one student is sending a message while his teacher is teaching. It reveals the strengths and weaknesses/shortcomings of mobile phone. In many people’s eyes, the mobile phone becomes a increasingly necessary device in our dairy life. Taking a look around, we can find examples too many to list. For instance, when a student have something emergency happened, he can call people to help if he have a mobile phone. Some people hold a different point. They assert that mobile phone has a negative influence on students. Taking a recent phenomenon for example, many students immerse themselves in playing mobile phone instead of concentrating on the study. Weighting up these two arguments, I am inclined to the first one. For one thing, it is convenient for us to use mobile phone, which provides a lot of function such as contacting with others and receiving the updated news. For another thing, we can use mobile phone to relax ourselves like listening to music. I admit it does have shortages, but I think we should learn to deal with these weaknesses.