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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

用户练习作文:

An English saying goes like this:it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.What it wants to reveal is that what a person really is isn't equal to what he looks like. The proverb is applicable to our daily life for the reason that we are unaware to judge someone by what they look like.Judging a person by his appearance may prevent us from totally understanding or getting along well with him.For example,if you don't like someone just because of his appearance,you will never discover his merits.What's more,only focusing on the appearance may lead to great loss to a country or company though first impression is important.Suppose that Mayun is judged only by his appearance,we can never imagine what great success he has made. Therefore,it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.It is better to draw a conclusion through a deeper understanding.

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