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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文中词汇表达丰富度不足，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。
My foreign friend Bob will come to my hometown after a period of time,so I prepare let him visit some interesting places. Firstly,I will take him to a river which is the most biggest river in my hometown.There are clear water and fine sand and so beatifully.Bob as a people come from desert country, willing like this. In addition, I will also take him to a History Museum in my hometown.The museum has been for many years,it noted the history for my hometown.Therefore,I think take Bob to visit the museum is a good way to understand Chinese culture. Finally,I hope Bob can come to my hometown soon,and I will give him surprises.
