2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章用词太过单一，还要注意避免拼写错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。

Computer and Man With the development of technology and science ,More and more people trend to use computer in our daily life.Such as comunicating with other people by QQ,working in our office,watching TV and so on. In my opinion ,There are advantages and disadvantages.First,It's convenient for us in our life.It improved our working speed.