字数:200满分:100分
学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;全文结构较为严谨;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。
I am an undergraduate of Tsinghua university. I know that there are many families in remote areas can’t afford the tuition for their children’s education. I do the part-time job and earn some money. I want to contribute to the project hope by offering a financial aid to a child in a remote area,but I want the candidates must meet my conditions. First, the child must love to study and always be positive to the life, even if her or his family is in poverty. Second, the child must write a letter to me in each semester to report the situation that how he or she uses the money and study situation. I will feel fulfillment when I can provide help to someone.