字数:200满分:100分
学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;全文结构较为严谨。
I wish to contribute to project hope by offering a financial aid to a child in a remote area. Having conceived such a plan for a long period, I write this letter to request your help to recommend a candidate. I wonder if it is convenient for you if two things concerning the child are taken into consideration. First, the child should come from GuiZhou province because I intend to help a child from my hometown. Second,it will be better if the child is a primary school student, because I am good at mathematics on elementary level. My plan will be carried out as follows. First, I will remit 300 yuan in cash every month so as to reduce the financial burden of the family. Second, I decide to teach the child maths and English in person during my summer vacation, which will surely be more beneficial to the child. I really appreciate your help and I look forward to your reply as soon as possible.