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Last night,I visited my friend Liu and had a pleasure talking at her home.When I asked her study.She said she could work out the difficulty in math normally, but when she was in the exam,she could hardly write down anything. I told her that maybe she was so nervous and she should make herself free. It’s said that ‘A lazy youth,a lousy age.’ As teenagers,one of the most important things is studying. So find out the right way to study is vital for us. Now I have some suggestions in studying here. Firstly, also one of the most important points, we should interest in learning.It’s said that ‘The interest is the best teacher.’ Build interest in studying can help us learn better. Secondly, ‘Genius is one percent add to ninety-nine efforts to.’ If you’re lazy in studying and even spend no time in it, no matter who you are,couldn’t get progress in learning even though you are talent in studying. To learn better, we should take notes carefully on class and review it after class. Also,we should do lots of excises to underpin the knowledge what we have learned. Thirdly, we must not be above asking questions if we want to learn better. If you can’t work out the problem,you should ask your classmates and teachers for help. The more you ask, the more you learn. Finally, making a balanced habit in studying is also important. We should make a defined schedule so that we can arrange time reasonably. Remember not to stay up,or you’ll have no energy to listen the teachers’ next day. Make yourself energetic will help you get the double result by doing half the work. All in all, try to find out the way suits you and practice diligently, I think you’ll get the result in everything.
