小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达不够丰富，学术词汇方面要多累积；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

Everybody has friends ,I am have a closed friend too. Her name is Huyanfang,she is from a small village,she looks thin and bones,we always play together, she always help me,when I feel loney,she compare with me. I am lucky to have this good friend, I hope we can keep our relationship until the end of the world. By the way, I also want to make more friends from different countries in order to improve myself.