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There are no similar leaves in the world as everyone is the most special one. The different character may cause the difficulty in talking of the people. Nowadays,getting along with others well is very important, it may affect your studying, job or life. It’s well known that two heads are better than one. You will know it especially when you are in trouble. When something is above your ability,you won’t work it out, so you should ask the people you known for help to solve it. But there are no two choices sometimes, maybe the people around you are strangers at that time. And not everyone is easy-going, so learning to get along with others is very important. On the daily life,we can try to pay more attention to the people who are around us. It’s said that a neighbor is better than a distance relative. Try to care the people who need help. Humans are rational, if you do something good to others,the same they do to you. But if others do something bad to you, you shouldn’t do the same to them. After all, two wrongs don’t make a right. We should protect ourselves by the law. Try to become a person who is lenient and kind. Because more people want to know the person who is easy-going but not who is unkind and selfish. The lenient behavior will lead more people to be close to you. And your kindness will win the good popularity. Listen carefully when others are talking and ask modestly.The good attitude not only makes you learn better but also help you earn a good first look. Try to get along better with others, the good relation will make your life colorful.