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Nowdays, it is not hard for us to buy foreign fruits in supermarkets or have summer vegetable in winter, as the airplane shorten the transportation time and geograghic distance. When enjoying the fruits and vegs, we cannot show blind eyes to its demerits it take. In the following, i would like to mention both the positive and negative aspects related to carrying fruits and veges by air. Cargoing by air goes with many merits. One of the apparent merits is that customers could have fresh food, as the time between farms and suppermarkets are less. As we know that, fresh food could improve our health, which could stimulate customers to buy more. Secondly, the shop owner could get more profit, as fresh veges would have more attrative than shrinking ones and would stimulate us to buy them. What is more, people like to try new things and thy can be satisfied by tasting them instead of watching them in TV, as airplanec could bright fresh food from another countries within 2 days. In a word, cargoing by air could improve our life quality and increase profit for sellers However, increasing cargoing fruits and veges comes with some disadvantages. On one hand, the air pollution could increase. It is easy to understand the air would consume fuel, which not only deplete non-renewable energy but also could produce greenhouse gas. On the other hand, it could increase the price of goods if transporting by air, which could push some customers away, specially those from middle class. Generally speaking, by air could affect our enviroment and some parts of people's daily life. To conclude, air cargo is like a coin which has a double sides. It indeed satisfies some customers with high demand in food quality and longing for eccentric food and sellers with more profit. But it also come with issues to our living surroundings and increase the price of the food.
