作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;采用了一些简单的从句。
September 25 2014 Today there is a thing makes me unhappy that I do not qualify for this year's academic scholarship. Why does this happen?Not because my grades are not good enough,not because my qualify is not good enough,but because of my dorm score did not reach 80 points.Originally my grades are eligible to apply for scholarship,but now I can only look at this opportunity loss from me.How similarly is the situation that I did not qualify for become a posgraduate.Is it really bad luck because I do?Or was I did not get the blessing of God?This is a fact hitherto unknown. But anyway,it is no use grieving about past errors.Time heals most troubles.All we can do is change our attitude to face a new life!
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