拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
September 25 2014 Today there is a thing makes me unhappy that I do not qualify for this year's academic scholarship. Why such things happen?Not because my grades are not good enough,not because my qualify is not good enough,but because of my dorm score did not reach 80 points.Originally my grades are eligible to apply for scholarship,but now I can only look at this opportunity loss from me.How similarly is the situation that I did not qualify for a postgraduate.Is it really because my dreadful luck?Or was I did not get the blessing of God?It is a fact that no one knows. But anyway,it is no use grieving about past errors.Time heals most troubles.All we can do is that change our attitude to face a new life!
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