拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
September 25 2014 Today there is a thing makes me unhappy that I do not qualify for this year's academic scholarship. Why such things happen?It is not because my dreadful grades,not because my terrible qualify ,but because of my dorm score did not reach 80 points.Originally my grades are eligible to apply for scholarship,but now I can only look at the opportunity loss from me.How similarly is the situation that I did not qualify for a postgraduate.Is it really due to my bad luck?Or was I did not get the blessing of God?It is a fact that no one knows. But anyway,it is no use grieving about past errors.Time heals most troubles.All we can do is to change our attitude to face a new life!
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