一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；请注意分段。

Today is a busy day. After school class was over ,I invited my classmate to play pinpang together for one hour,and then I went home ，help my mother do housework ,after that I did my homework，when I finished homework,it was seven o'clock, so I watched my favorite programs,and then I had dinner with dad and mum, what a busy day,I was so tired that I got sleep so early at night.