2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

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Artists should be sopported by government money. technology research and social service can improve people's living condition obviously.such as technology,education, medical. but these can only satisfy people 'goods conmand,their thinking can not be satisfied. government should pay attention on artists investment. there are some reasons for this opinion. firstly, people have many demands, and artists are the way to say love and think. In this past socity, the art model had been appeared. If artists not potive, and then the think will be fixed, at that time, technology and economic development will delay. so high sociaty develop accompany variety of cultural and artists. secondly, artists and cultural have area characteristic, it is a key point which make country more centrelization. at last , artists supply a good looking of different to world views, and it train people's creat and reasearch ability. in the last, government should invest social base service and at the same time, it also need invest art. and then government can built a healthy and positive society.