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Artists should be supported by government money. Technological research and social service can improve people's living condition obviously. Such as technology, education, medical. But these can only satisfy people 'goods command and, their thinking can not be satisfied. Government should pay attention on art investment. There are some reasons for this opinion. Firstly, people have many demands, and artists are the way to say love and think. In this past society, the art model had been appeared. If artists not positive, and then the think will be fixed, at that time, technology and economic development will delay. So excellent society develop accompany variety of cultural and artists. Secondly, artists and cultural have area characteristic, it is a key point which make country more centralizations. At last, art supplies a good looking of different to world views, and it train people's create and research ability. In the last, government should invest social base service and at the same time, it also need invest art. And then government can build a healthy and positive society. .
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