2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；多多加强从句和复杂句的使用。

We all konw that computer is important,useing it working、surfing、buying and so on.More and more people cannot leave it,that is means computer is my another parnter. One hand,computer give ours more easyly life.human can work or enjoy life all over the world through it.Also,we can use it chating with family、watching movies、buy clothes and more.So,we can see it bring us so convenience and wealthy life.However,on the other hand,bad effects make us fell not very well.yungster.youngster is attacted computer,they always surfing the Internet ,liking entertainment news、read novels at home or play games.so that waste many times. In my opinion,between of the relative of computer and man,depend on man how use it.