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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:57浏览次数:3257
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Perseverance makes people stronger.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮。你持有什么观点?给出具体原因和例子。

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We will become stronger not only in our physically but also mentally if we are used to being persevered. Every one of us must not be luck always and we will face all kinds of troubles on all kinds of things. For instance,if we are students,sometimes some problems such as math problems, Chinese problems or English problems,which makes us bothersome and worrisome,but if we can continue to solve it by turning our teachers or classmates for help,we always can work it out and we build confidence on study. Insistence make us take easy at everything. Because fortitude can lead to strong and patient mental.For example,if we do everything in endurance even though we have failed several times and we never give up,we will improve ourselves during this process eventually,we will get something benefit us on the constantly hard working. At the same time,we will make ourselves get used to being persevered in everything gradually,which make our force stronger and stronger,finally we build a faith of which we should be head-on in everything and continue but not say die. Perseverance makes people stronger,people who are repeatedly doing things they dislike or above their ability will get experiences because they will find out their shortcoming and disadvantage during these processes.And the chance always offer to people who are ready for everything. In a word,maybe we will not get the result at once if we continue to do something,but in the long term,perseverance benefits not only ourselves but also people who are around us because it can affect others, too. Don't give up whatever you face,you will harvest from seed one day.

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