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山东济宁邹城一中高一上学期期末英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:27浏览次数:2593
要求:
根据以下提示,结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
Encouragement from a friend plays a very important role in motivating you to solve the problems you are facing.It helps you fight the difficulties and get out of an unfavorable situation you are stuck in.
注意:
(1)无须写标题,文章开头已经给出,不得照抄英语提示语;
(2)除诗歌外,文体不限;
(3)文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
(4)词数为120左右。
       Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times.          
用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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I am glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student. When I started learning senior English at the beginning.I had much difficulty in learning English I found it so difficult that I almost lose heart.Latrer,I realized the importance of English.As a result, I worked hard such as reading and reacting English tests as often as possible.I also went to ask my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English. It is their help and your encourager that I can make great progress in my English.And now I'm getting more and more interested in it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class.Wish you all my best.

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