作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
I am glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student. When I started learning senior English at the beginning.I had much difficulty in learning English I found it so difficult that I almost lose heart.Latrer,I realized the importance of English.As a result, I worked hard such as reading and reacting English tests as often as possible.I also went to ask my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English. It is their help and your encourager that I can make great progress in my English.And now I'm getting more and more interested in it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class.Wish you all my best.