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初中英语命题作文真题演练(60):假如你有一百万

发布时间:2014-01-10 17:54浏览次数:350
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假如你有一百万,你将用来做什么?所给提示短语必须全部用上。不少于60词。
put…in the bank,give some of the money to charity,travel around…
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If you ask me how do you spent your 30 million droller, may be I would respond: first, I would shopping something I didn’t have. Is not aimlessly shopping. like a beautiful house, it should has 3 floor, each floor has 4 rooms. first floor lived me, second lived all my family, third lived my best friends. second, I would invite my family and friends to eating or singing in the greatest places. third, I would take tour group and traveling world, or to go to holiday village enjoy the best service. I would like Europe. like New Zealand, Australia and Japan. Over there have natural landscape. I have never traveled by oneself, so I want travel abroad when I was young. fourth,I would donate less for charity. I thought it is a good things. Then I would give some to my country to build a hope school. Next, I would give some to medical research because I want everyone to be healthy. At last, I would put the rest of them in bank for future life. Because the money is limited.

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