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hellow, boys and girls, my topic of online shopping ,recently, most of us like shopping in the internat, especially girls who like enjoy dressing up.There are both advantages and disadvantages.first,it can let us shop and don't go out our home,but in my opinion ,it will make us become lazy, wo don't want to go to home, so we should go out and see that view in around !