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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:2972
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题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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As more and more students begin to make friends online, we should consider whether it 's wise to make net friends. For my part ,it's not a sensible choice if you concentrate too much on making friends online. There are several reasons for it. Firstly ,it 's not safe to make friends with strangers. As is known to all ,network is a virtual world, in other words, the network can be deceptive. It's reported that thousand of girls were cheated even killed by their net friends whom they have never met before. Secondly ,putting too much time on chatting with e-friends may have bad influence on making friends in real life. Spending too much time online makes you distant from your friends around you. You may lost a good friendship in the long run. Thirdly ,friends in real life are better than e-friends in many aspects. Compared with net friends, friends in life can always care and help you in time. Without friends in real life, one may feel very lonely and upset. In conclusion, making friends online is not safe and may affect your normal and healthy life, consequently, it 's not wise to make e-friends

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