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2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7112
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Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

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报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压

第四段:结尾

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Nowadays,the quality of life in not only large cities is decreasing but also in the villages. And what causes the decreased quality of life, I am about to explain several reasons here. In my opinion, the reasons why the quality of life is decreasing are the environment population, the health of humans and the too much pressure from the work, which not only be bad for their physic but also lead to the unhealthy mentalities of people who are under the large pressure. The worse and worse environment causes a few of diseases especially in large cities,which leads to so many healthy problems,people who are not only care about their health but also under too much pressure living in the low quality. What's more, people who can't stand the such stressed lifestyle sometimes prefer to commit suicide. The quality of life affects our lifestyle so closely that we should try our best to improve it for living happily. But how can we do?what measures we should take to increase the quality of life? We can know that there are three major reasons result of the worse quality so we should take some measures to prevent the quality of life from becoming worse and worse. To come up with the problems of which the environment results we should advocate the 'Green technology', and every person should build a life style which is good for the environment to lead to the green life. And people who are always stressed out of their jobs should learn to build the healthy awareness and do some excises often to decrease the pressure. I believe that if the environment becomes better,the quality of life will be improved when we have been in the health awareness and used to make ourselves relaxed by doing some excises.

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