小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my best friend I have a good friend，lemon is his name，and 24 years，I have know his for there years，she has very beautiful 、gentle and nice，she is 160 cm and weights 50KG she has very love her mother and father，she will accompany them when she has some free time，his mother likes cook 、shopping and singing with her and she is talking 、play basketball with his father。 she is good at sing and dance，red is the best colover she like。