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Directions: Present your perspective on one of the issues below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views. “The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.”
增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累；请作者增加词汇丰富度，同时注意单词拼写的检查；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
The science and art are very inportant to us in our lifes.With science development in nearly years,more tenologhies have made great progress,and more convinent products have been created,it change more to our lifes.For examples,the e-commerce become fashion,we can buy everything on the computer just need to key the keyboard.About the Art,it can calm down our mood,and give us happyness.In summary,science and art most benifit to us.
