2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is shanxi province. it is undenirable that my hometown has many interesting places.Such as jici ancient place,the double temple,Yingzi park and so on. Admittedly,wutai mountain is the most interesting place in my heart. It is commonly believed that Wutai mountain is the most famous place in shanxi province.Every years the majority of people from different countries or places go to there to visit Wutai mountain. Wutai mountain has arouse wide public concern,at the same time,Wutai mountain was made world heritage last year.all of people were proud of it. eexcept that,Wutai mountain has beautiful scenery,a hospitable climate and elegant enronment ,but the most attractive place is Wutai mountain is a buddhist holy land.when you come there, you will feel quiet from your heart and you can integrated with nature . Taking many factors into consideration,I will show my foreign friend wutai mountain,because there is no reason to refuse visiting Wutai mountain,it's a perfect place!