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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17593
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文中学术词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

So fast is the paces of our life, that we much make decisions in a very short time. Acting like a swith, we always want to see the light on the problem immediately after the decision is being made. However, just like a famous saying told us, acting on a impules would always an evil, which means snap judgments can never be trusted. Throughout the history, there are countless examples for us to support this statement. Just open your closet, you will find plenty of clothes, shoes, pants that makes you went into repture at the moment you saw them, while turned out to be unsuitable after you staggered back to your home with them. This is mainly because we are emotional creatures who are not likely to be rational all the time. When we are acting on a impules we are so happy that it is not necessary for us to foretell the future situation. However, the worst thing is that for years, this little weakness is being more and mre carefully studied by those shrewd business men and advertisers who are extremely good at creating scenes that lure us to make these snap judgements, therefore we should be cautious on making them.

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