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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;部分学术词汇也能熟练使用,但文中有较多拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Thereis an old saying that people never judge a book from its cover. From my pointof view, this saying also applies to our attitudes towards others: never judgea person from their appearance. Because you never know one person’s true meritsif only judging from their appearance。 Itis true that an attractive appearance is of great significance not only fordaily life but also for the job. However, it is unwise to judge one person bythe appearance for the following reasons. On the one hand, with the advancementof science technology and medical level, people can transform their surface byall means. On the other hand, the appearance should not be the merely criteriafor judging an individual, considering that are more important factors,including Courteous, kind-hearted, honest and so on。 Inconclusion, it is unadvisable to judge a person by their appearance. That's whyI assert that we should pay more attention to one's inward and place high valueon inner cultivation。

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