高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

in the past, my hometown is a beautiful place that has hundreds of trees. the fishes play on the clear river. There are simple and crude buildings and the street is straitness. The people live a simple and trouble life. But now, it had changed much. There are high buildings and many factorys. thousands of cars run in the roads. the environment has become to be bad due to industrial development. the trees is decresing and the fishes have been gone. So it is neccessary that the corresponding partment need to manage the pollution.