文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇。
It's unwise to get a conclusion once you see or hear something. To get a conclusion once see or here something means the things don't get through your mind,and only by your feelings something come from experience.In our lives,there are many thing for us to take for granted or we ,in fact,often see these samples. To seeing means you can get the appears of the thing and you haven't get the other messages like something contacted with you can't see it ,what the feeling when you touch it,and how it smells.And the same with when you hear something.All things in the world can't exist with single tube,no matter it is a thing or just a material. So if we want to know about something sinsercely we cannot only use our eye or ear ,we must call for all fellings ,experience and even use time to prove the truth of you see.
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