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My opinions on copying others’ homework My name is Lihua.And I'm a student.Recently,I discover some students copy other's homework.That's a very unfavorable sense.This student can't finish their homework by thyself,So they only rely on others people do their homewoke. But why they are chosen to copy others’ homework? Reasons difficult and too much.The first reason is they are too lazy.Second is they are not intelligent and not to study hard. Third is doing homework have no interest through that time...... In my opinions, copy other's homework not good,it can effect against the school rules,and impotent is solutions other students study hard.If ever students can't finish their homework by herself,only choose to ask others for help,What are they can study?So students should not do it! That's all my opinions,I wish all the things will beater,and all the students will not copy others' homework and choose to study hard!
