文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色。
It's unwise to get a conclusion once you see or hear something. To get a conclusion once see or here something means the things don't get through your mind,and only by your feelings something come from experience.In our lives,there are many things for us to take for granted or we,in fact,often see these samples. To seeing means you get the appears of the thing and you haven't got the other messages like something contacted with it you can't see,what the feeling when you touch it,and how it smells.And the same with the conclusion after hearing something.All things in the world can't exist with single tube,however it is a thing happen in daily life or just a material. So if we want to know about something sincerely we cannot only use our eye or ear,we must call for all feelings,experience and even use time to prove the truth of you see.
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