2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Xi'an is my hometown.There are historical city,culture about human.However,i understanding it a little.My foreign friend is going to visit my hometown.Eating,wearing,sleeping,walking need to reserve. The first of eating,there famous food is noodles.Everyone eat it,when had come here.Secondly,my room can live.If you disagree,the hotel welcome you.The last,we should have a car,borrowing or renting.That are wishing you have a good trip. On the other hand,planning the place,i will serve.when you coming,you choose one.