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Xi'an is my hometown.There are historical city,culture about human.However,I understand it a little.My foreign friend is going to visit my hometown.Eating,wearing,sleeping,walking need to reserve. The first of eating,their famous food is noodles.Everyone eats it,when had come here.Secondly,my room can live.If you disagree,the hotel welcomes you.The last,we should have a car,borrowing or renting.That is wishing you have a good trip. On the other hand,planning the place,I will serve.When you coming,you choose one.