2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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today,with the society development. many parents help children do anything .this is a overprotective phenomenon .if parents want there child could stand in the society by the own in the future ,so they need left them do something what they can do. in order to parents could help child to be independent .parents should remember three points.to begin with ,they must having patient to child whatever they child looks very confused for there question.what's more ,parents want they child fly high,they need bold left they hand.last but not least,they always need have confedent to believe child . all in all,overprotective maybe is a kind love in parents eyes ,but that it's a hident hurt to child,so please left your hand you may be could see another picture.